29A- Venture Concept #2
) Opportunity- There is a need in the world for safety. This need is shared by all people but is hard to come by in many regions of the world. Many people rely on other nations and foreign militaries for protection. This leaves them vulnerable to being politically manipulated or simply abandoned during a time of need. In a world of highly technical weaponry, especially intercontinental ballistic missiles, it is necessary that people in countries with weaker militaries still have access to defensive measures against these weapons. This market is not incredibly clear to define but would include countries that feel threatened by the dictatorship of North Korea or highly combative Middle Eastern nations. It includes developed nations that do not have any form of missile defense capabilities and also those developing nations that rely on the United Nations or America for protection. This opportunity is huge but will require large amounts of resources and cooperation
Hey man, it’s nice to put a face to these blogs and finally see my group. In my opinion your blog was very well presented, the lighting was perfect and so was your camera angle. Your body language was very professional and so was your tone. You were very well-informed presenting statistics, costs and plans for your idea. If I was to do anything different it would be to look at a smaller crowd, it felt like you where speaking to 50 people. Overall that was a nice pitch, I know it’s hard to memorize all this stuff but you pulled through just fine.
ReplyDeleteI think your presentation was polished and overall created a professional setting that brought credibility to the pitch. To go along with the sense of professionalism the lighting and camera created, the ideas you presented shared noteworthy information and created a market that can enact needed change. I wouldn't change a lot about your pitch, but maybe running through it a couple of times prior to would take away some of the memorization issues.
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