17A- Elevator Pitch 2
I tried to improve on my first elevator pitch by not forcing memorization so much (as was noted in some of the feedback on the previous pitch) and just talking in a more casual way. Hopefully it isn't less successful as a pitch but memorizing facts just seemed awkward in the video, though in a professional setting it would be necessary. Also, my business idea is real complicated so this helped keep it simple.
Hi Logan! Happy second elevator pitch. I think it was a very well-presented Pitch. If I happen to be in the shoes of a millionaire near the nuclear capabilities of North Korea I would highly consider your product. Maybe there’s a package that comes with the missile defense and some extra guards too, just in case I have some totalitarian ground troops near my vicinity.
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